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Rise to become the flower of hope,
of justice,
of wisdom.
And when the time come
bloom to show us what's valuable in this rotting world.
Save our souls
and protect them against those who are eating us,
devouring us
and we still don't understand that we are slowly dying.
Show us the true color of happiness
to give us life.
Show off your sweet smell
to let us take our first breath
in our real life.
Awake us...
Please

I wrote this poem thinking of a flower. I did find a pretty picture (as you see) matching at some point the image I had in my mind. I gave the flower something like magic. Power to give hope and courage. I hope I managed to achieve it through this poem.
(comments allowed = write whatever you think about this :) )
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coprophage Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Beautiful words and thoughts. I wish I could write.
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D-X-4 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you liked it. :)
Have you tried to write anything?
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coprophage Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
The last thing I tried to write was a short story about a group of young teens caught in a time warp and are transported to a mythical world and ultimately face "Colossus" which was the title. That was back in 1982! yea ancient huh? LOL.
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D-X-4 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That sounds like a good scenario. Maybe you should try writing again.
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coprophage Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Maybe, one day. Thanks!
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